DVD commentary meme going around again

Most of the times when the DVD commentary meme has gone around I've assumed no one wanted to hear about my stories (well, except when they did), but I've written a lot of fic since I last considered the matter. :)

So! Almost all of the fic is under the fic tag. The AO3 listing is somewhat less complete but probably easier to search.

Leave a comment with a fic you want commentary on, I'll do my best to give you commentary.

DVD commentary meme: The Logic of Creation, for Swordage

swordage asked for a commentary on The Logic of Creation.

( Commentary in bold )